Another amazing poem girl! I love how so many questions were asked you kept right up with the flow of everything and it made ur poem so awsome!! You always make me a read a great poem from you..i never came across a bad one...you keep that up you have so much talent!

OMG gurl, I loved this poem .. lol .. It was gr8, hey and dont forget to email me back soon, i cant wait to see what you say about my last email, haha ! ! Gr8 poem, Keep it up ! !

Oh thanks to you all for leaving me some stuff to work and dont ever think your comments go unheard...i look forwrad to returning the favour to you all Thanks again Peace out Eirisa xoxo

Thanks for your comment.
For two resons really.
one its always nice to get feedback hehe
but thankyou for letting me onto such a talented writter.
But i have to say you missed a part of the poem.
the part where your heart is ripped froim your body and cast aside.
..
sorry
anyway great poem

Another beautiful poem. You are most welcome about the comments i made for your beautiful poems. You write so beautifully. It always makes a reader, at least for me, to want to read each and every line... It makes one to imagine the picture you are trying to draw with only your words, and you seem to accomplish each and everytime. Keep up the beautiful work. Another five my dear.

Libby

Thanks for your feedback Semaran, you do have a valid point, maybe ill edit that into over the weekend - i really appreciated constructive critisim such as what you have give me so THANKS...id appreciate it on my other pieces if you have time :o) And Libby once more thank you looking forward to seeing some of your new work so i can return the favour, your words make me smile thankyou so much for your time :o) Much Luv One Luv Risa xoxoxo

Thanks to you all for your feedback - love poems are usually a lil outta my league im better at writing about dark more depressing issues but with feedback like this! I should try positive stuff more often, every single comment here has touched my heart and made me a better writer THANKS Much Luv xox

Nice one!!!

You're poem is good. I really like the way you've written it. It makes it interesting to read. I'd like to read more. Check out mine sometime if you get chance, thanks.x

Thanks everyone i look forward to returning the favour to you all!