I like ur poem its very true and yet in away not so.. i thought it was very nice good job

I like ur poem its very true and yet in away not so.. i thought it was very nice good job

I like ur poem its very true and yet in away not so.. i thought it was very nice good job

Whoops I guess she pressed the submit button a few too many times. Anyway, I liked the poem, and I can sorta see why you would keep in all jumbled together, like maybe to make it seem hasty and complicated. I think you should fix the spelling errors though.

i liek this poem ben :) its really godo, but you made a few spellign mistakes o.o lol :) its really good, your a fantastic writer, keep it up. :)
-Mortalidaga

Thanx all
Ben