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by Skinny12004   Aug 5, 2004


It began every so quickly

You loved me so deeply

You use to joke about not letting me go

But that was some truth that I didn't know

After we would go out you would be in such a rage

If I didn't call you I was sure to get a page

When other guys would look my way

I would hold my head down so you wouldn't have nothing to say

I prayed that it would get better

But it seems my body continuously got battered

I kept blaming myself for every single hit

But all I could do is ask you to quit

You said you loved me and it would get better

But you said you would make us last for every

But that night couldn't nothing become worse

I guess your abusiveness was a thirst

We were at that party you remember

It was late October or early November

We were all having fun

So I thought until you got drunk

Out of no were you started to holler and scream

Then next thing I know you were pounding on me

Everyone is trying to get you off of me

But it didn't work because my eye was so swollen I couldn't see

What happen to all your love right then

Why couldn't I just kept you as my friend

I really don't remember much

But I never will for get that last punch

You hit me so hard I flew into the wall

I had no strength all I could do is fall

But at that moment quite was kept

Because at that very moment I wasn't aware I'd be fallen to my death

NOT A TRUE STORY BUT IT CAME CLOSE 4 A FREIND OF MINE

Copyright 2004

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  • 20 years ago

    by Skinny12004

    No. I just read so much of these type of poems so I just wrote one. I also got one called Abuse.

  • 20 years ago

    by Cheri

    man dat is a good as poem. is dat from a personal experience?