by DMG Aug 5, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Left in the dark, no one around. |
by Aken Sol
The vibes of depression are so strong in this poem... I'm suprised you've only recently wrote poetry. Keep it up, you have untapped talent/ |
I dont say this a lot, but it was Awsome. Verry well worded. And i could see everything you were expressing in the poem. :) |
by HOLLY ARMER
That was amazing! You conveyed such sadness and despair! |
Man that was awesome one of those poems u cud read a 100 times yet still want to read it more |
by Shona
that was so fantastic, great work :) keep writing |