wow....... i..... i ..... i honestly don't know what to say, that was just so amazing, great work, it was just so powerful! i loved it!

that was so fantastic, great work :) keep writing

mwa xoxox

Man that was awesome one of those poems u cud read a 100 times yet still want to read it more

That was amazing! You conveyed such sadness and despair!

I dont say this a lot, but it was Awsome. Verry well worded. And i could see everything you were expressing in the poem. :)

-Courtney-

The vibes of depression are so strong in this poem... I'm suprised you've only recently wrote poetry. Keep it up, you have untapped talent/
Aken Sol