Aww this is a sad poem, but non-the-less written very well with a lot of emotion. good job and keep writing!

~Grace

if you rewrite this line "But I think ten years she has grew!" it wouldn't be so terrible.

Now about my poems......For the first one about the ghost it was a seriouse of 3. You read the last one. You would have known if you read the first one. That was stated in the very first comment. ANyways thank you for your comment.

Also For my second one "I HATE YOU"
that poem was completly real and really happend to me!!!! When that was over I really wanted to have a gun. That ending fit the ending of how i felt. SO wheither you would change it i will not because its how i felt at that very moment.