Wow! It flows great even with so much contrast. I love it.

Gosh...wow...awesome....fantabulous.
u r the godess of poetry for gods sake???

Im speechless, and thats a good thing. great poem.

((theres not many words that i can say that hasnt already said.))

omg..this is amazing...you are a very talented writer! your words are perfect and fit perfectly into each line...you are amazing :) keep it up!
-Mortalidaga

Wow, deep, and brooding. A soul searching for answers to this crazy thing called life. These lyrics could be easily be put into songform. Trying to think who would sing such a profound song with lines like these! definatly not brittany!! j/k... love it, 5 out of 5

great work, i can relate, top stuff, nothing else left to say, everyones already said everything i wanna say so just ditto to everyone elses comments :P

compelling reading , 8/10 from me

god speed

Nice and creepy

Sounds like something I'd write. I like contradictory lines in peotry, "I've lost things...I never had", "I hear things...no one's said"....very cool ;)

5 thumbs up from me!!

Madness swarms around my head.
I hear things...no one's said.

cool line