Save me

by nikki   Aug 6, 2004


Feeling nothing
but something so sad
crying so hard
feeling bad
suicides wrong
but is life right?
whats the point
when everythings a fight
tears of pain
and so much fear
all these things
that won't dissapear
scared of something
but not sure what
who am i
and what am i not
so confused
and so lost
wanting to die
at any cost
nothing helps
when i don't know
what am i doing
where can i go
help me please
someone save me
i'm dying here
can't anyone see?

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  • 20 years ago

    by kid.baby.

    its really sad but really good. i think a lot of ppl sometimes feel this way. :( xx

  • 20 years ago

    by jess

    cant u guess alredy wat i think of it???? F**KIN AWESOME!!!! luv ya

  • 20 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    i liked this one=) i can trully relate to this one... was once like this :P asking my self if somebody can see me dyin inside =S but thats how life is... bitter sweet... =) keep up the good work... and thanx for the comment =) much love...

  • 20 years ago

    by Marta

    wow, such a powerful poem. deep and very sad. i feel like that at times also. it was an awesome poem and flowed beautifully, keep it up and good job. Oh! and thanks for your lovely comment, much appreciated. :)

  • 20 years ago

    by >> Beautifully Mistaken

    hey, i realli like ur poems, they r extemely gud, u ahve a lot of talent, neva let it go to wastre, n thanks so much 4 commenting on ma poems, it means so much for me

    luv * T a N z *
    xox

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