whoa, thats great that you can put out your feelings, I can relate to this poem a lot another great poem! keep it up!
~laurel

Hey, this was a great poem! I can see exactly where you're coming from.

I loved the way you repeated the 1st bit of each line! The repitition was very effective!

You managed to put all your feelings into words AND make it rhyme, a hard combination! Great job!!

Thanks for your comment =0)
Take care,
Luv Riffy xx