by Lisa Aug 7, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I saw the little girl pass by, |
Hey, thanks for the comments on my poems. I really like this one, I like the aspect of how you wrote it like you were the mother in the grave, nice. |
*dies*..that was so amazing..defanetely a tear jerker..*wipes eye* keep it up 5/5 |
awwww thats such a great poem!!! realy sweet and sad! keep up the good work! :) |
by Forever29
A very good poem with an excellent ending. My favorite part 5/5! |
by Natalie84
WOW....beautifully written!! I didn't expect the ending! Very nice!! Although it was terribly sad I think it was the best I have read in a while!! Excellent write!! 5/5 :) TAKE CARE!! |