by Sierra Rae Aug 7, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Why does “I love you†bring tears to my eyes? |
by Broken
wow...thats really good...you should call it "that last chance is dead" or "its too late" using the last line of your poem is good for a title! i usually do it like that...anyway...you've got great talent sierra and you should definatly keep writing! |
by *Elizabeth*
wow...that was great work!!!! |
by Sierra Rae
I already have a poem called broken mirror and I don't see how that would go with it...hmm. |
Thats a great poem. Even i used have arguments with my mom. BUt i miss her a lot, now a days... I even miss the worst fights! Great poem dear...I really loved it. But i don't know what title may suit it. I am also planning to write a poem for my mom.. Hey you write what i plan, before me! (Do you have a mindometer? A machine which reads mind??? I doubt!!!!!) See you, Trincy. |