I thought your poem, was very true. Many people struggle in families, such as those. I thought your poem was very good. Keep up the good work. If you could please visit my poems, and write comments, please. My poems, are Just Listen, I miss you mom, and Looking in eyes, etc. You can visit my page, on members, to see them all, because I have about seven of them. That would be great. Once again, you are a good writer, keep up the good work!

Amanda Hallam