OMG, I loved this pom its GR8 ! ! Good Job .. !

that is so beautifull written..and so tragic...im so sorry for your friend v.v..you are an amazing writter <33
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damn that was sad i about cried but i held my tears in check..... gr8 poem!!!!!!!!!!

that was a great poem, brilliant work, i burst into tears when i read the name peter, i just recently lost someone named peter, anyway the poem was beautiful, filled with such emotion, great poetry

That poem was very good. Sorry it happened to your friend.

great poem, like always! lol. keep it up! u made my cry, i am soo sry fer wut ur friend went through.

I think this poem really touched me and I think you did a really good job on this poem. Very nice.

that was a beautiful poem, i hope ur friend is ok

love always stephyG xxx

OMG, that is so sad, and i hope ur friend is doin ok. Ur poetry is awesome tho!

Incredibly Touching and Sad... I'm sorry for your friends loss.

This poem was so sad. I'm sorry for you're friends loss. She shouldnt blame her self though. Your poem is very touching.

This is such a sad poem. Well written .. but very depressing .. I really feel sorry for your friend..

This is such a touching and sad poem. I have no idea what I would do if this happened to me. your friend is very strong. tell her so

Dis is sad. makes me realise that nothing in this life is certain especially life

This poem made me cry, it iz so gud though. but it makes em sad and think about my bf dying. k i g2g but this iz so gud

Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x

Omg I love that poem

"I watched you disappear that day,
your life was taken away from you,
and as I watched you die in my arms,
on the inside I died too."

thats like the best ending i ever read great poem ~5~

This poem is wonderful. Extremely upsetting. I got tears in my eyes when i was reading it
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Beautifully written hun.

Chrissie xx

I'm sorry for your loss.
Such a simple poem but so heartfelt

Good job 5/5