i really liked this poem. i also liked the description!!! keep writing

this was a really great poem, awesome work!! its totally worth a 5! :)

wow, you really know how to take simple words and make them come alive in your work, wow

You are amazing!. I love the way you write this was brilliant. Keep up the good work. gave u a 5.

Wow what another original piece of work. Truly amazing. Im sorta speechless here..

I really liked this poem. It took me a couple lines to really get into it but once i did i was stuck. So desriptive and well painted picture. Pure talent here. Keep writing hunnie.

You took an unusual idea and very creatively worked it into a fine poem with touches of humor, eeriness and irony. Good work!

very good rhymes i must say!!!! very impressive even for some one who reads a lot of poetry like myself!

Loved It, Loved It... very good and meaningful poem... as vix said... i like the irony of the whole thing. good job (by the way.. HP fan?)