it was a really great poem you did a good job. I hope it wasn't related to experiences for you. I can relate to your poem though nut my father hasn't gotten that far all though I can't say I wish he wouldn't so it would be over. but if you ever want/ need to talk I'm here.
-Terray

that was REALLY good! Check out my poems and if you gots msn add me country_girl_NB@hotmail.com I would really like to talk to you!

omg...thats so beautifully writen..and so sad...your an amazing writer..<33
-Mortalidaga

That poem is really sad, but such a good poem... well done... carry on!!!

i realte totally that was awsome and well written!! keep up the good work!

good poem very emotional.
i really like that

steph
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