hey 1st one to vote on this poem, it is an amazing poem. it tells the story brilliantly. i like it :)

zHay...its real cool...just keep it uP!...

i thought it was really good! you have tremendous talent! keep up the good work! im loooking forward to more by you!

I really liked this poem. You explained the story, the setting, the mood, -everything woderfully. I enjoyed that one a lot.

So good and so sweet. It brings back alot of memories for me. This was done well, I could actually see you both dancing under the moon. I agree with all, you have a great talent. Keep it up.

Aww that is a good poem. Real touching.

Very well written. Excellent storyline. I was intrigued by the strength of character that was exercised to keep from stepping over the line and jeopardizing a valuable friendship.