I thought your poem was very cute, you had good flow! Keep up the good work. So I gave you a five. Oh, and if you could please read my poems and comment on them, that'd be great, especially, Just Listen, and Looking In eyes, and Is it My fault. Thanks a lot, and once again, good job.

Sincerely, Amanda Hallam

Lol yeahhh thats a cute poem. i made a poem about a pickle named tom..but i didnt know you lol. so its weird that ur name is tom pickle. haha