Please take a moment and try to think about what this poem is talking about. It should be fairly easy. I tried to write it so the meaning would be hidden. I hope you enjoy it.

stunning - but that is now the standard i expect from someone as talented as yourself - keep up the great work:o)

lovely.. *sigh*

Wow, such a beautiful and touching poem. Your an amazing writer.

Wow! what amazing poems, you're words are beautiful and your rhymes are perfect! keep writing, take care <33
-Mortalidaga

The meaning is certainly hidden. It makes it so much more interesting to read and gives it mystery. You've got a talent, keep writing.

This was.....I dont even think it has a word! It was breath taking i loved it!! I wish i could give u higher then a five i really do! You deserve more! EXCELLENT JOB!

Alright...I'll tell you all what it desribes. It's telling about two lovers eyes. Stromy you're right on the money hehe.

I am in awe!!! This was a sensational piece! I mean the description were breathtaking! This piece took me to a far off place while I was reading it!! Superb job!!!

I am truly disgusted, just thought id let you know that this has been stolen by some guy from another site. 80% of wat he has posted is work from poets on this site. I suggest you go have a look. http://www.trinipulse.com/community/member_tp.asp?id=lanos145&pageNumber=3