by Ashleigh Skye Aug 8, 2004
category :
Life, society /
about society
I am sitting on the curb, |
that was an awesome poem and ive been through the homeless thing and alot of my family has also sooo that touched me awesome work |
by ASPHYXIATED
omg your poem was so good it really makes ya think.......keep it up....*hugs* |
by chloe
i do see your point, although my dad thinks they should try harder for themselves and get up and get a job and i see his point too... but he doesnt have a lovely poem to go along with his argument.. so u win lol great job x |
thanx |
you should be proud of it, its a fantastic poem! it is very inspiring and had a great message! It really shows you what its like to be home less. i really enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work! |