by Morgan Aug 9, 2004
category :
Life, society /
other
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I really liked this. I was reading it and I could see the scars of life. I didn't give it a 5 though, as you can see. I alwaysa give a little constructive criticism. Your rhyne was excellent, but the rhythm got a little choppy. Thats about it though, everything else was top notch. |