wow... that was really good! very nicely written. i haven't really seen any poems like this before, that's why i like it alot. very unique and different, keep it up. xoxo

I wonder what power took hold of this person? Did you mean power as in w/e the dark forces, satan, so on and so forth; or did you mean it as a specific vice or sin? Mysterious!

Well done girl! You are really talented, keep up the good work!

nice one!