this is so sad. i really liked it...... it is great. Nice job. xmollyxx

beautiful:)

Good work. Very sad story, i thought it was good how you repeated the title through out the poem. The only thing that seemed to throw me off when reading was the fact there were so many format and rhyme scheme changes within your poem. I always feel a poem flows and works better when either stuck to one or two formats. The first 5 stanzas i loved but i felt as the format changed, the ending became weaker. Tragic poem, well done.

this name atracted me to ur poem not only becuse it's a good title but...its th ename of my cat lol..this poem is differnt but not i a bad way..it very orangail