As per most of my poems initially i had a completely different idea, but this is what i ended up with, as per usual im trying to push out a message as i do with most of my pieces, id appreciate if you could comment on your interpretation and any critisim is welcome to help continuously improve my poetry...Much Luv to you all and thanks for your time, this piece has really special meaning to me...

I can not believe you wrote this..I am still crying from the poem you wrote about me lol...But this was was just..Mind shocking to me..I can relate to this one in so many ways..I'm so young so i have nothing to offer these people i see like this but only a hug...But for you to do this for this women was amazing..It shows the special and WONDERFUL person you are and don't let no one tell you different! I love this poem so much its awsome ..and as for what you said any critism is welcome to improve your poetry...You need no improving becuase your on a much higher level...I thought this poem was spectacular! and so are you! great job on another!!

Thanks girls - you words mean so much...Jess Chels and Cheryl your interpretations really mean alot to me hey Much Luv xoxo