Seems that no love poem is complete without the word eternal. Very nice job, I enjoyed it to its full content. This poem was beautiful...keep on writing, you have a real talent.

It seems you really care for the one you love. I hope someday I'm lucky enough to have a love like this. You may love her a lot. This certainly isn't a bad thing, but perhaps God has another plan in store. Trust him, love him, and good luck. Excellent poem!

I am so lucky to have you in my life. You wrote such a beautiful poem for me. When will I ever open my eyes?