VERY VERY TRUE!!!!. I gave you a 5 because I couldn't have worded it better myself awesome job!

thanx everybody im gald that you liked it.. and i guess that it wasnt that bad after all thanx for your comments :)

Well, I think you did an awesome job. I like the topic and the way you put it together. I enjoyed reading it. Good job Hayley;)

thanx you

ASHLEIGH THIS IS A GREAT POEM. REALLY DEEP & SAD IMAGERY. WORDS OF TRUTH THAT ARE VERY THOUGHT PROVOKING...I HAVE OFTENTHOUGHT ABOUT WRITING APOEM LIKE THIS MYSELF. FLOW WAS UNDISTURBED AND RHYMES WERE ORIGINAL AND DID NOT SOUND FORCED!!