Beautiful poem

I only have one word to describe this poem...beautiful. The emotion that the reader feels while enjoying this poem is just amazing.

Awesome I love it!!!!

Absolutely amazing write. Congrats to you.

Keep writing.

Wooow this poem is great can't stop reading it

Wooow this poem is great can't stop reading it

LOVE IT! ITS ALLOT LIKE MY STYLE!!! GREAT STUFF.

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Well done I loved it :)

Amazing poetry it really was moving thank-you :)

Nice... too romantic... teardrop

This poem is more like a short story; however, with that being said, I thought it was well crafted and romantic.

Nicely done.....AL

Quite dramatic! The first half seemed so gentle and romantic that I wasn't really expecting the ending. But that made me think about the poem afterwards which is good, and I actually like that for me there is so much that is left unanswered. x

Wow, the gift of telling a beautiful story in poetic form; Truly amazing! The emotions and feelings were powerful. I felt like it was a movie playing out in my mind. Wow! Thank you so much for sharing your gift.

Fair...

The story itself was very nice. The grammar however, was quite poor.

"But in the inside I was getting mad."

This is redundant. "On the inside" is more appropriate.

Wow. Your imagery was awesome. I felt like I was there.

:)