I loved this poem. But I just want to tell you something, you should try harder to look on the bright side than you do on the dark side. Its been proven that even a fake smile can put you in a better mood. Maybe you should jot down everything good in your life, and make it your next poem. You have talent, now I wanna see you have a smile. : )

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

I LOVE THIS POEM SARAH! omg!!! I was scared while I read it! the whole chains thing... shiver... omg! I love it, your such a good poet, god has blessed you wonderfuly