by Katie Silva Aug 11, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
My tears create a river |
by Andrea
wow, you are very talented and i cannot wait to read more from you! i have to add you to my fav. list. |
by .x.PorteR.x.
Woah that is heaps good. It's beautiful and emotional and captivating. I'm gonna have to go and read your other poems now, you have real talent! You go girl! |
by Sean Allen
Great poem, the poisonous flowers could be many things, but I would interpret them as your fears and disappointments in life. I noticed that in your poem you used "lye" instead of "lie", and I wondered whether that was a mistake, or whether you used it as a pun, since lye is a substance that eats flesh. |
by Marta
wow.. i loved this one. one of my favorites. i love the way you write, awesome job. lookin forward into seeing more :) xoxo |
by natasha
i loved it truly awesome work |