hey, ive never read anything quite like this..im lost for words lol. its really sad but really beautiful and it has so much depth to it. I keep reading it over lol, its amazing! well done, :) beanxx |
wow, this was a very emotional poem, it was extremly profound and captivating! very nice work! im looking forward to more of your works! |
by Joy
This is a really emotional poem. Great work. Excellent! Now YOU take a bow! |
by Jamie
That's a really good peom. I am the same as u, i have been writing for a couople yrs now and just finally got enough courage to post them on here. |
by natasha
i loved it truly awesome work |
by Marta
wow.. i loved this one. one of my favorites. i love the way you write, awesome job. lookin forward into seeing more :) xoxo |
by Sean Allen
Great poem, the poisonous flowers could be many things, but I would interpret them as your fears and disappointments in life. I noticed that in your poem you used "lye" instead of "lie", and I wondered whether that was a mistake, or whether you used it as a pun, since lye is a substance that eats flesh. |
by .x.PorteR.x.
Woah that is heaps good. It's beautiful and emotional and captivating. I'm gonna have to go and read your other poems now, you have real talent! You go girl! |
by Andrea
wow, you are very talented and i cannot wait to read more from you! i have to add you to my fav. list. |