makes me wonder what's Il Castello Di Memorie. is it a real place? i have a hunch it means the castle of memories. if it is- then the poem is very true. interesting title. i liked the way you started and ended the poem. take care:)

amazing, I think this one is my favorite. I love how you ended this one also. I love everything about it. Great i gave you a 5.

this is very nice...very descriptive. i love your writing. you are very talanted...keep writing...
Always,
Dawn

Oh My God!! That was beautiful...can't even say anything more than that!! Bravo!!

Sarah

excellant , wow just awsome *flies away*

You're correct, Il Castello Di Memorie means "The Castle of Dreams and Memories". Originally I wrote the poem "Memoria" for this particular subject, but I decided to re-read and then totally rewrite it. So this is kind of like Memoria II in a way. I'm glad you all liked it.

--Bryce~

Ashtonishing. Bottom line, its bueatiful.