by TrUtH hUrTs Aug 12, 2004
category :
Life, society /
other
The sounds of the battle pound in my head. |
The beggining remings me of Mulan for some odd reason, lol. I loved the poem though, very nice job on it! Keep up the good work and keep writing! |
by Andrea
excellent poem! |
That was very deep. I must say, I find your work to be very refreshing. I'm glad to have found your work. Few people have I seen write like this. You are truely amazing. That is especially true now as people are literally fighting on the desert floor of Iraq. |
by nikki
.......*stares at the screen speechless* |
by Sarah
That was amazing...really touched my heart...my cousin just got back from Iraq. In one piece and walking! That was so true to what many of our soldiers are feeling or have dealt w/, I gave it a 5! Bravo!! |