awww chloe..this poem is so beautifully written..you have such amazing talent..and im sorry about that jordy guy...you may not believe me when i say this...but doll, its his loss, not yours, if he cant see your amazingness then he isn't worth the tears or blood, i know you love him...but you can do so much better, theres someone out there who wont make you cry..i knwo you don't know me, so this has no effect on you...but people do care...and im a part of people..
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-Mortalidaga

I know how you feel...I have been where you are! This poem is packed with such feeling and depth...great job!!

OMG, i am so sorry!! I am a huge fan of yours, not to sound dorky!! But you do have an amazing talent, u inspire me!! hehe. if you ever ever, need to talk to ne one, email me or im me at toxicpwincess or augustsweeti09! i will be there for you! you dont need him to make u feel happy, youll find sumone ten tymes better! but for the record, if hes that great, i hope you guys make up!!

that was very good... thats all i can say right now b/c i am crying too.. only for a different reason... keep up the good work...

All these other comments are right, I have looked at several of your poems and I am very impressed. You are only 13 years old and you have so much talent. Keep writing, cause you have a future in this if you wanted it. By the way, don't worry about that guy in the poem. I know it hurts, I have been there, but one day you will realize that it was better that it happened this way. Great poem.

i understand what you are going through it is the same with me

Wow... amazing. I'm kind of having the same kind of problem. well no that's not true. See, I'm totally in love with this guy... and we use to be in love but for some reason, he won't even talk to me now. But back to your poem. Amazing. Seriously brought tears to my eyes. Great job. Totally a 5. Keep up the good work.