"I see tears of sorrow dripping from her soul" That line is mesmerizing! This is a magnificent piece!!

Thank you so mcuh holly, to just see an actually part picked outta my poem...makes me look at it more then i ever did when i even wrote it...thank you.

Very well written! I loved it! 5 out of 5!

excellent poem! i felt like it was made for me. line by line... it was amazing! keep writing and take care:)