Comments : Now I smile

  • 20 years ago

    by Melissa

    Awww thats sweet and really good that you are happy now. Unfortunately i couldnt get over my first love for ages. Still cant.

  • 20 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    thats beautiful :) im so happy you're over it :) keep wrtiting and take care <333
    -Mortalidaga

  • 20 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Wow this is a wonderful poem about first love and didn't bring back some memories for me damn! Thanks so much for sharing that with us...im sure almost all of us are able to relate to your piece at one stage or another...looking forward to reading more of your work...
    Much Luv
    Eirisa xoxox

  • 20 years ago

    by MeL JoY

    aww thats touching
    i love it
    just beautiful

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    very good poem! 5/5