Dear Parents

by Raven   Aug 13, 2004


I am daring
I am bold
I will not do what I am told
I'm dreamer
I'm a queen
I am everything in between
I love without boundaries
I cry secret tears
I can't let anyone know my fears
I'm coming of age
I've barely started
I'm a girl standing where the roads have parted
I'm smart but confused
I'm weak but strong
I'll make my decisions
no matter how wrong
I know that you are scared
of what we'll find
on this journey through
dangerous times
But you must understand
no matter what you say
I will break free
and go my own way.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I liked this piece as soon as it started, but then the structure and flow got lost a little midway. But still, a good piece. I liked the subject matter and how you approached it. You also had a nice rhythm, with simple but efficient rhymes.

    Brad

    P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every poem that you read.

  • 18 years ago

    by someoneimnot

    So true. definetly the same boat. great poem.look forward to reading more.
    thanks for commenting.

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