Comments : Dear Parents

  • 18 years ago

    by someoneimnot

    So true. definetly the same boat. great poem.look forward to reading more.
    thanks for commenting.

  • 14 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I liked this piece as soon as it started, but then the structure and flow got lost a little midway. But still, a good piece. I liked the subject matter and how you approached it. You also had a nice rhythm, with simple but efficient rhymes.

    Brad

    P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every poem that you read.