I ENJOYED READING THIS, WELL DONE.

Great poem, it was well written and had an awesome topic, good job, keep writing.
Love,

-Blue

wow...that was a really deep poem, I love the way you wrote this poem..Awesome piece of work ! Keep writing ! Take care,
E.

Chilling truth... jus chilling... very well.. awesome

Great, but so sad, i can see this story folding out in front of me, oh yea i took your andvice on the poems of mine that you rated and said they were short so i lengthend them. thans :)

Hey i have a new poem caled "The Black Rose Night" check it out
thanx :)