This was an excellent poem. You put into a few short lines what I would be putting into about a page of writing. The point that comes across to me, is that we want to make a name for ourselves in life, we want to be something so people will notice us. I really liked this poem. Keep writing. ps- thanks for commenting on my poem!

Wow, I honestly thought that was excellent! Even if it was quite short. well done! -- You're going on my favourites list!

Hopeful-enough to break the barrenness of silent fear of doubt. We are all one with uncertainty. Which is what makes our successes heaven.