by Sw33ti3
WOAH!! that was a really good poem!!It freaks me out tho lol but it was still really good!! Gr8 job and keep it up.. |
by Amy
Thanks..Just wanted to say dont anyone bother to point out the whole Twin mistake lol cuz im gonna fix it as soon as i can..which is tomorrow cuz it wont let me edit til then. |
by Tyler
lol :P Amy Thats a long ass labour :P lol I love you hun lol... |
by Andrea
I think this is one of the best poems i have read so far!!! |
by jess
great great work, i really truely loved it. i love all your work this was really deep i don't know what it was about it but i just can't put words to how good it was!!!! |
by TheDukeofluv
that was a kewl poem...i really liked it |
by Amy
Wow! Wonderful poem!! I really loved it!! Terrific job!! So interesting and wonderful!!! |
Whoa...I love the dark sense that comes from this. Makes me feel at home almost hehe. Very nicely done. The title alone makes it deserve a 5...even more. Unbelievable. |
pretty neat stuff, i like your creative way of writing it :) keep up the good work :) |
by Michelle
dude.... great poem i liked it alot |
by SCARECROW
That's really good. I can actually see the whole thing. Awesome. :) |
by SCARECROW
That's really good. I can actually see the whole thing. Awesome. :) |
by SCARECROW
That's really good. I can actually see the whole thing. Awesome. :) |
great poem, u used such great, descriptive words that i can picture this garden, noe dont get me wrong, it freaks me out! but great job! keep writing!! |
by Sammie Moore
Omigosh Amy that was beautifull! |
by Danielle
Wow Ams... I'm totally speechless right now. That just gave me goosebums everywhere. Gosh, that was freakin scary. But so beautiful as well. Your such a brilliant writer. God dang. That was terrifying just thinking about it. I think that I Hvae to go read it again! haha. Yep Yep.. Gotta go! Bye Sweetness :-D :-D |
by Danielle
wow yep yep... just read it again... |
by HOLLY ARMER
Just amazing...the descriptions were so vivid I could hear the screams and feel the icy chill in the air! Awesome! So dark and very twisted!! Loved it! |
by Morgan
omg...i love this poem. its so beautiful. great job! |
by Ophelia
this poem paints a picture of the reality that so many of us are trapped in day after day. this is beautifully written, and i can see with much thought. keep up the good work and good luck. |