by Eibutsina
Very sweet - your lucky to have such a great relationship with your mum! Lovely poem very well written |
From what I have read from you today, this it certainly your best work, in my opinion. It had strength, depth, emotion, flow, good wording, good rhyming. Twas good. My favourite stanza had to be the third one. It held the most power. |
by kelleyana
Parents are golden but moms are everything. I can relate to this poem so much. You said everything i could have said to my mom , especially on days when i needed her most. Very good poem. Love it. |