Elternal Eternity(Sonnet)

by SarZz   Aug 14, 2004


Sonnet sequence

Part 1

abab cdcd efef gg

"Tomorrows the judgement",
cried out the poor lass,
Posessing not a single happy moment,
Despair and regret is all what she has,

Over-coming the heat,
That has embodied her soul,
She walks on her heavy feet,
Happiness was the only thing she stole,

Twitching and bellowing,
She's crying for an aid,
She hadn't committed a single wrong-doing,
The words she had said couldn't fade,

Once a word has been allowed to say,
It cannot come back its way...

Part 2

Envelope sonnet: "abba cddc efgefg

This she thought was the deepest misery,
She could'nt hold herself,
"Why?she started to delve,
This was nothing more than trickery,

Ignoring the plunging sensation,
She's regarded as a downright lie,
Her wanting to die is just to imply,
Shes chaste, still tried for execution,

The satans are jeering,
Assuring her that she's nothing more than regret,
Tears are trickling down her cheek
No shoulder to cry on-no one's caring,
Fearing what she might see on the next step,
Surrounded by a feeling so barren and bleak,

Part 3

aaabbbcccdddee

No more games-no more tries,
Words echoing like lies,
What alone left are the dim-witted cries,

The daylights dying,
And she's still crying,
Breathless, and vacant here she's lying,

She wants to finish it off,
With a cruel mirthless laugh,
She cannot do with merciless scoffs,

Meeting the end of the life,
She wants to end it up with a knife,
because-of delight shes deprived,

The judgement's tomorrow,
Where she'll be buried in sorrows...

Part 4

abcaabba dedeff

The nightfall's gone,
To reveal her dying day,
She'll be hanged to death
With all the hopes torn,
What alone can be done is to sit and mourn,
the blocked passageways,
Can't let her survive any way,
But then-a fierce idea is born,

Why not cease it beforehand,
Its might even be painless with no proof,
Pain was something she could never stand,
So she decided to jump down the roof
Life was merely a punishment she thought,
Cuz she had suffered more than alot...

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  • 20 years ago

    by Nicole Diane

    GOOD JOB SARA!!

  • 20 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    ur good =)... love ur sonnets =) much love for ya gurlo... so so good =)... hope u pass by mine sometimes ... =) much love...

  • 20 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I applaud you trying out the sonnets. Although i only know the form of the first one properly and i agree with Sean, the syllable count wasn't right for a Shakespearian sonnet.
    Well done with the actual poems though.

  • 20 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Those are pretty scary. I think the first sonnet was supposed to be Shakespearian or something, but it didnt really follow the syllabic rules, so I was a bit confused by that. I think another one of those was Petrachian, but I'm not too sure. Pretty good work.