by Tina Aug 14, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Shattered heart, broken in thousands of pieces and sharp like glass. So abstract, so painful, so full of broken emotions. It is incapable of being loved. The rigid edges all fit back together but it is a jigsaw puzzle no ones willing to solve. This ugly wretched thing used to be so innocent and pure, now all it knows is pain, for I am a broken person. My soul is forever lost in darkness and I will never be loved again. |
by Aymon F
The more i read your poems, the more i am amazed at the way you can acpture an emotion, or a feeling, in so few words. The way your words flow, its almost magical. Very nice one. |
by *Elizabeth*
That was awesome!!!! Very well written!! |
by Olivier
You've got a special way of writing! I really like that. Most poems do not describe as well as you do. it's only a pity that you haven't put a kind of real life story in it... But that doesn't really matter... Keep doin' it! |