Don't Leave Just Yet*a story about cancer*

--this poem is about a lady i have only known for a few months, but for the few months that i have known this lady, she has been an angel. she has an incurable brain cancer that is too rare to have a cure to it. the doctors say that she wont make it past Christmas. i love this lady and she will be forever missed by the ones who know her--

Don't leave this world just yet
My sweetest TJ
Because I I'll cry and cry
Forever and a day
I've only known you
For a short time
But you mean enough to me
For me to write this rhyme
The cancer is coming
And it won't quite
You shouldn't have to feel
This horrible shit
You deserve better
You know you do
Your kids deserve
To get to know you
I feel really bad
For your husband Dave
Who will have to lower you
To your grave
I'll miss you TJ
Forever and a day
Why, God why
Must you take her away
I can't believe your dying
It makes me feel numb
You'll be forever missed
Tammy Joe Lohmann

*Please comment on this poem, i would like to know what others think about this. It would really help me gather the courage to read this poem to her before its too late. thank you for taking your time.*