My Guardian Angel

that was good. thanks

that was good. thanks

Thanks for all your comments

very beautiful!

(sean missed one... last line first word should also be you're)

Hi there. First off, welcome to the site! Secondly, Sorry if you find all of my corrections bothersome, but it is something I do, almost my job on this site or something. Anyway, I copy pasted your poem into this comment, but I corrected any/all the mistakes I found, so read through it carefully, and if you like it, then you can change your poem to put in all the corrections. I really liked it, and I hope you submit more work soon.

My guardian angel, always at my side,
I can't imagine what you see.
To come from a place so beautiful,
To keep a watch out for me.

You'll protect me from all the harm
If ever I should fall,
I know my guardian angel is
Here if I should call.

I pray at night, they're all to you.
I know you'll answer my plea.
My guardian angel, while I'm asleep,
Your awake watching over me.