by Sean Allen
Hi there. First off, welcome to the site! Secondly, Sorry if you find all of my corrections bothersome, but it is something I do, almost my job on this site or something. Anyway, I copy pasted your poem into this comment, but I corrected any/all the mistakes I found, so read through it carefully, and if you like it, then you can change your poem to put in all the corrections. I really liked it, and I hope you submit more work soon. |
very beautiful! |
by Rebekah
Thanks for all your comments |
that was good. thanks |
that was good. thanks |