omg..you have such talent!! this is beautiful!! like so overly well-written! you have souch potential, i believe you can go really far with this :) keep writing, please dont stop <33
-Mortalidaga
-xoxox-

oh wow, that was beautiful.. i've never ead a poem like that before.. please keep writin.. can't wait!

much love,
danielle

hey, really good poem, I like it.

Aww thats so sweet!

That is so good. I'm a daddy's girl and that almost brought tears to my eyes. I love it!