loved it , gr8 job ! ! ! check out mine sometime too !

Hey, now that was a good poem. It tells a story that a lot of men and women both go through. I really thought this was a great poem. Good job.

i just want to say...i know exactly how ya feel...especially about that cigarette part. my boyfriend that i finally found after searching all my life for, just left me to 'figure things out' you should read my writing, "my thoughts". i wrote it right after he broke up with me over the phone. it sucks...but yeah anyways great poem.

that waz a great poem i liked it alot i does really tell what people go through i am with bryan