by Bryan Aug 16, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
It's 11 past 11, |
by Amy
Wow that was amazing. Actually made me feel like crying. Very well written and heartbreaking. |
by HOLLY ARMER
This was tragically sweet!! Your talent truly mesmerizes me!! Thanks for sharing your poetry!!!! |
by Eibutsina
I like this poem it was really different and i could relate, but also had that hidden element of saddness in the story rather than in the language - very creative nice work thanks for sharing and check out mine if you have a chance |
aww thats so cute I really liked it keep up your good work |
by *Katie*
That was an amazing poem.I'm sorry she's not wit u but that was so deep and she would be proud to have known and loved you. You have suchunique talent. Don't waste it! lots of love from katie xxxx |