Comments : One Moves On

  • 20 years ago

    by iwish0207

    hey i really like this poem. its good keep writing! ~michelle~

  • 20 years ago

    by Nobrainy_duh

    CalandanBrood, thanks for the comments, I was never good at spelling, I'll try to keep that in mind!

  • 20 years ago

    by Nobrainy_duh

    By the way, I wrote this poem in 8th grade, (I'm a senior now), and my freind that I'm talking about in this poem and I are over the whole situation. We're freinds again, and we've grown stronger! Keep the comments coming! Peace!

  • 20 years ago

    by BlackRose

    good it sounds really heartfelt i can tell you went through some things... hope they got better...