by HOLLY ARMER Aug 16, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Misplaced feelings, floating free. |
by SarahBeth
That poem really touched me....you're an excellent writer........keep it up! |
your first two stanza are kind of 3rd person-ish and then you switch to first person.... usually Idon't likethis... it is rare to find someone that can do it tactfully and well. |